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RogueScribner	Star Wars Haiku		Lead	[-]
Posts: 1278 Thu, Nov 17, 2005 1:41 AM *St. Charles, MO*	Tags : None I thought it'd be fun if we made up little Star Wars haikus. I'll start off by summarizing the movies in haiku form! The Phantom Menace A hidden threat acts Many fates are entertwined Some live and some die Attack of the Clones A mystery born A life manipulated The Clone Wars begin Revenge of the Sith The war is over But at what cost? Friend fights friend Jedi: zero, Sith: won A New Hope Many years later Reluctant hero rises Catches Daddy's eye The Empire Strikes Back Imperials march Retribution is a bitch "I am your father." Return of the Jedi Friends reunited Evil eradicated Tortured soul at peace
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sabacc72	There once was a man from Mos Eisley	#1	[url]	[-]
Posts: 6068 Thu, Nov 17, 2005 2:51 AM Consul - Orlando System Baron Admin	I can't believe after I privately revealed a passion for Star Wars sonnets, you go and try to overshadow me... The Empire Strikes Back A toy collector is forged House full of plastic
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Audtoo	Re: There once was a man from Mos Eisley	#2	[url]	[-]
Posts: 925 Tue, Dec 20, 2005 6:41 PM	Wow, Mike, that's talent! I forgot the proper form for haiku shortly after graduating high school English!
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sabacc72	Re: There once was a man from Mos Eisley	#3	[url]	[-]
Posts: 6068 Wed, Dec 21, 2005 3:39 AM Consul - Orlando System Baron Admin	I agree, good idear Mike. I'd bet money if you submitted that to the Insider it would get published. Also, haiku, which are often about nature, have a very simple form: three lines, 5 syllables- 7 syllables- 5 syllables.
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RogueScribner	Re: There once was a man from Mos Eisley	#4	[url]	[-]
Posts: 1278 Wed, Dec 21, 2005 4:37 PM *St. Charles, MO*	I don't get the Insider, so I don't see how I can submit. But my intention was for everyone to have fun in this thread. Don't worry about it being "good" or not. Just write a haiku and run with it!
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sabacc72	Re: Mike meant:	#5	[url]	[-]
Posts: 6068 Thu, Dec 22, 2005 1:14 AM Consul - Orlando System Baron Admin	Just write a haiku Don't worry about how good Have fun, run with it
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RogueScribner	Re: Mike meant:	#6	[url]	[-]
Posts: 1278 Thu, Dec 22, 2005 1:33 AM *St. Charles, MO*	Actually, it's more like: Just write a haiku Worry not about value Have fun, run with it
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iabou	Re: Mike meant:	#7	[url]	[-]
Posts: 108 Mon, Dec 26, 2005 1:25 AM Jar Jar Binks	hmmm i need to think one up
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Padawan Tai Lin	Re: Mike meant:	#8	[url]	[-]
Posts: 767 Wed, Dec 28, 2005 2:46 PM *Orlando*	Those are great! I'm smiling right now We should all try some. Make each day count
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iabou	Re: Mike meant:	#9	[url]	[-]
Posts: 108 Wed, Dec 28, 2005 3:15 PM Jar Jar Binks	a bolt of velvet i need to make a flowing desire my mind and hands free
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RogueScribner	Re: Mike meant:	#10	[url]	[-]
Posts: 1278 Wed, Dec 28, 2005 3:30 PM *St. Charles, MO*	You've got two too many syllables in your first line, ia.
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iabou	Re: Mike meant:	#11	[url]	[-]
Posts: 108 Wed, Dec 28, 2005 8:07 PM Jar Jar Binks	oops...odd i counted five i must have written it down wrong
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iabou	Re: Mike meant:	#12	[url]	[-]
Posts: 108 Wed, Dec 28, 2005 8:08 PM Jar Jar Binks	ok, fixed it velvet bolt I need to make a flowing desire my mind and hands free
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iabou	Re: Mike meant:	#13	[url]	[-]
Posts: 108 Wed, Dec 28, 2005 8:10 PM Jar Jar Binks	Action figure fight the Attacktix click then fire one man down for now
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DarthCaves	Re: Mike meant:	#14	[url]	[-]
Posts: 378 Thu, Dec 29, 2005 1:51 AM Okeechobee	VADER He was a Jedi Then was turned to dark by lies His son brought him light. Darth Caves IF you will not fight, then you will meet your destiny - Lord Vader
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Padawan Tai Lin	Haiku for us	#15	[url]	[-]
Posts: 767 Thu, Dec 29, 2005 1:15 PM *Orlando*	Here I go! As fans we believe The Force is with us always Today and forever Make each day count
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RogueScribner	Re: Haiku for us	#16	[url]	[-]
Posts: 1278 Thu, Dec 29, 2005 3:24 PM *St. Charles, MO*	Close, but you have one syllable too many in the last line. I suggest: "Now and forever."
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Padawan Tai Lin	Haiku for us	#17	[url]	[-]
Posts: 767 Thu, Dec 29, 2005 6:45 PM *Orlando*	Thanks for the help! I counted wrong too! I like it better with your ending anyways
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Audtoo	Re: Haiku for us	#18	[url]	[-]
Posts: 925 Mon, Jan 2, 2006 11:58 AM	Never imagined All the new friends I would meet For love of Star Wars!
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sabacc72	Re: Haiku for us	#19	[url]	[-]
Posts: 6068 Tue, Jan 3, 2006 1:08 AM Consul - Orlando System Baron Admin	That was so cheesey I decided to copy it: Star Wars fans unite Build a network for us all Orlando System
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RogueScribner	Re: Haiku for us	#20	[url]	[-]
Posts: 1278 Tue, Jan 3, 2006 2:24 AM *St. Charles, MO*	Monsignor Campbell Ambassador to newbies Good friend to us all I <3 Campbell!
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